TORN WITHIN — EPISODE 3: ECHOES OF LOVE
TORN WITHIN — EPISODE 3
ECHOES OF LOVE
“What lingers after the love is gone?”
By: Lovedoctor Kollar
📖 Previously on Torn Within — Episode 2: Shattered Promises
“When comfort turns into confusion, and promises begin to break.”
“When comfort turns into confusion, and promises begin to break.”
Sleepless night
Days passed, but Dara couldn’t shake the unease. Every time she looked at Kelechi, her heart pulled in two directions — love that was pure, and a longing that frightened her.
One afternoon, she found herself standing in front of Chike’s wardrobe. His shirts still hung neatly, carrying the faint scent of his cologne. She pressed one against her face, eyes shut, breathing in the ghost of a man she once loved.
But when she opened her eyes, it wasn’t Chike’s face she imagined. It was Kelechi’s.
Her knees buckled, and she sank to the floor. What is happening to me?
Kelechi too was restless. In school, his friends laughed, talked about girls, plans, football… but he was distant. His thoughts always drifted back to his mother — her sadness, her smile, the way she looked at him sometimes, almost as if…
He shook his head. No. It’s wrong. It has to be. But the echo of her touch haunted him.
Deep connection
That night, as Dara tucked herself in, she heard a knock. Kelechi stood at the door.
“I… I couldn’t sleep,” he admitted.
“Come,” she said, her voice softer than she intended. He sat on the edge of her bed, shoulders tense. Silence filled the room.
Then Kelechi whispered, “Sometimes, I hear Dad’s voice. When I look at you, it feels like he’s still here.”
Tears welled in her eyes. She reached for his hand — just to comfort him. But when their fingers laced together, it no longer felt like mother and son. It felt like two lonely souls clinging to the same ghost.
And the echo of love — past and present — refused to fade.
To Be Continued…
Coming Up in Episode 4: The Other Side
“Every heart hides a secret door — and Dara’s about to open hers.”
👉 Don’t miss Episode 4 — coming soon!
Share your thoughts in the comments — what do you think Dara will do next?
Every echo leads to another secret.
“Every heart hides a secret door — and Dara’s about to open hers.”
👉 Don’t miss Episode 4 — coming soon!
Share your thoughts in the comments — what do you think Dara will do next?
Every echo leads to another secret.
🔁 Missed the last episode? Catch up on Episode 2: Shattered Promises
💭 Frequently Asked Questions (Episode 4)
Q: What is Episode 4 of Torn Within about?
A: Episode 4, titled “The Thin Line”, explores how guilt and affection begin to blur the boundaries between comfort and sin.
Q: Who wrote Torn Within?
A: The series is written by Lovedoctor Kollar, known for his deep storytelling and emotional realism.
Q: Where can I read the previous episode?
A: You can read Episode 3: Echo of Love before diving into this one.
Q: When will the next episode be released?
A: New episodes drop every two weeks. Stay tuned to Lovedoctor Kollar’s blog for updates.





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